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【拉票】为同学的女儿拉选票,大家帮帮忙!!

  • happy水中月
    2007/07/11
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  • 给我同学的女儿张思佳投一票,她参加北京新东方杯英语演讲比赛
    投票地址在 http://edu.sina.com.cn/xdflecture/piaoxuan/
    她现在排在总排行榜的第47位。
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  • happyjyl

    第1楼2007/07/11

    呵呵,支持!投了一票,现在是351票。不过这样一来不就有失公平了么。还是得靠实力说话呀。已经看到有网友对一个女生的评论是“五中分校的学生刷票太厉害了,大家心里都有数”。不管怎么说,小姑娘那种阳光的劲头我很喜欢,支持!

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  • happyjyl

    第2楼2007/07/11

    给小姑娘的人生格言提个建议(仅限于语法):

    Life is a river, and I am the most active wavy(wave); life is a picture, and I am the shiniest view; life is a piece of music, and I am the liveliest period (movement). I will rush to the sea, though I (may) fall down (on)the sharp rocks. I will save sunshine and burst it everyday, though in cloudy days. I will sing loudly and happily, though pains are (may)cover my body. This is I (me), a sunny girl, a girl who will never give up. Every moment, I try to be a better me (one) and never say impossible ('impossible'). I believe I can touch the cloud one day!

    开头的三个排比句很不错,个人觉得把life is … and I am…中的and改成in which好些,更强调自己和生活的关系。不过改得多了就完全是成人的口气了,不可爱了。

    呵呵,感慨啊!在她那个年纪,我也曾满怀信心和骄傲地说过I am the shinest…之类的话,现在断然不会再说了。不过不是因为失去信心,而是因为懂得内敛了。

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  • 发哥

    第3楼2007/07/11

    支持水中月,投一票!





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  • 一抹冰蓝

    第4楼2007/07/12

    支持,看到朝气蓬勃的年纪,看到阳光、快乐和自信

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  • shushengligou

    第5楼2007/07/12

    助一臂之力,已经投票了。

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  • learner1999

    第6楼2007/07/12

    应助达人

    已经支持了!和前面的差距太大了,得多多调动人马才有机会进入前面啊

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  • 黄鹤楼

    第7楼2007/07/12

    也投票了
    但是差距好大呀
    得全民动员呀

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  • jun来也

    第8楼2007/07/12

    要不但凡是投票的朋友(给出链接)给予积分奖励?应该参与的朋友会多一些。只不多好像这么做不符合比赛的精神啊!
    PS:貌似这次比赛女孩参加的比较多啊!

    lengcui 发表:也投票了
    但是差距好大呀
    得全民动员呀

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  • 风行

    第9楼2007/07/12

    支持一下,全民动员

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  • 闲鹤野云

    第10楼2007/07/12

    I Already voted for her.
    river, wave: "wave mainly can be seen in sea not in the river"
    the shiniest view: "most bright scene?"
    music, and I am the liveliest period (movement):"chapter or tones"
    I will save sunshine and burst it everyday: "and share it with or give it to the world in need everyday??"

    Anyway, good luck!

    happyjyl 发表:给小姑娘的人生格言提个建议(仅限于语法):

    Life is a river, and I am the most active wavy(wave); life is a picture, and I am the shiniest view; life is a piece of music, and I am the liveliest period (movement). I will rush to the sea, though I (may) fall down (on)the sharp rocks. I will save sunshine and burst it everyday, though in cloudy days. I will sing loudly and happily, though pains are (may)cover my body. This is I (me), a sunny girl, a girl who will never give up. Every moment, I try to be a better me (one) and never say impossible ('impossible'). I believe I can touch the cloud one day!

    开头的三个排比句很不错,个人觉得把life is … and I am…中的and改成in which好些,更强调自己和生活的关系。不过改得多了就完全是成人的口气了,不可爱了。

    呵呵,感慨啊!在她那个年纪,我也曾满怀信心和骄傲地说过I am the shinest…之类的话,现在断然不会再说了。不过不是因为失去信心,而是因为懂得内敛了。

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