The English is not of high enough quality for a journal paper. I suspect that the author did his/her best (which is orders of magnitude better than the best Chinese I could ever hope to achieve in my lifetime had I tried). With professional editing and addressing the points regarding DOX, SiC preparation, and the CTE prediction, the paper is worthy of publication.
特别是 which is orders of magnitude better than the best Chinese I could ever hope to achieve in my lifetime had I tried