I did some corrections over this story in grammar.
skyhunter 发表:A Really Bad Day
There was this (a) guy at (in) a bar, just looking at his drink. He stays (stayed) like that for half of (no need for of) an hour.
Then, this big trouble-making truck driver steps(steped) next to him, takes (taked) the drink from the guy, and just drinks (drinked??)it all down. The poor man starts (started) crying. The truck driver says (said), "Come on man, I was just joking. Here, I'll buy you another drink. I just can't stand to see a man cry."
"No, it's not that. This day is the worst of my life. First, I fall (fell) asleep, and I go (went)late to my office. My boss, outrageous, fires(fiired) me. When I leave (left) the building, to my car, I found out it was stolen. The police said that they can (could)do nothing. I get (got)a cab to return home, and when I leave (left) it, I remember (recalled that)I left my wallet and credit cards there. The cab driver just drives (drove) away."
"I go (went)home, and when I get (got) there, I find (found) my wife (was) in bed with the gardener. I leave (left) home, and come (came)to this bar. And just when I was thinking about putting an end to my life, you show (showed) up and drink (drinked) my poison."