gonghaofan 2007/12/17
以自然辩证的观点探讨了农产品质量安全管理的进展,以科学发展观分析了我国农产品质量安全管理的措施以及过渡方式,探讨了农产品质量安全管理的方向。 Has discussed the progress of agro-product safety management by the viewpoint of nature dialectics , has analyzed the measure of China's agro-product safety management as well as the transition way by scientific development view, and has discussed the direction of agro-product safety management.
happyjyl 2007/12/17
[quote]原文由 [B]sharkwein[/B] 发表: The pollution-free food plan and the system of agro-products safety are two important policies, which are utilized to strenghten the quality and safety management of agro-products. [/quote] 这里漏掉了一个“构建”的翻译,所以我说不是一回事。
闲鹤野云 2007/12/17
[quote]原文由 [B]sharkwein[/B] 发表: 无公害食品行动计划和农产品质量安全保障体系构建是我国加强农产品质量安全管理、提高农产品品质的两项重要政策。 The pollution-free food plan and the system of agro-products safety are two important policies, which are utilized to strenghten the quality and safety management of agro-products. 行动计划这里没有翻译:[B][color=#DC143C]Action plan for pollution-free food and agri-product safety assurance system are two key policies that strengthen agri-product safety and improve agri-product quality in China.[/color][/B]
poorlittle 2007/12/19
The original Chinese version was probably drafted in the pattern of [B]回顧[/B]过去 -> 分析現在 -> 探讨將来. My suggested translations are as follows: [B]Review [/B]the progress of the management on the quality and safety of agro-products from the view point of natural dialectics, scientifically analyse the arrangement and transition ways for managing the quality and safety of agro-products in China; explore the various aims (or roles?) in the management of the quality and safety of agro-products. Regarding the management of the quality and safety of agro-products, its progress has been reviewed from the view point of natural dialectics, its arrangement and transition ways have been scientifically analyzed, its aims (or roles?) have also been explored.
蜀国大将军 2007/12/18
[quote]原文由 [B]sharkwein[/B] 发表: 以自然辩证的观点探讨了农产品质量安全管理的进展,以科学发展观分析了我国农产品质量安全管理的措施以及过渡方式,探讨了农产品质量安全管理的方向。 discuses the management progress of agro-product safety by nature dialectics, analyses the policies and transaction ways by scientific development view, proposes the direction. 这样行吗?[/quote] 1.我觉得management放的位置不太合适2.质量安全好像表达的不全,现在不都用QS标志吗,改为quality&safety3.我国没有体现,用domestic 4.科学发展观,以科学发展观分析,好像汉语也不太通顺.汉语改为 "科学发展的分析了" 5.过渡应为transition,非transaction 6.方向建议改为趋势,用trend. discuses the progress of agro-product quality&safety management from nature dialectics point of view,analyses the domestic policies and transition approach [color=#DC143C]in a scientific and developmental way[/color](from a scientific and developmental point of view), explores the trends. 红字部分用括弧内代替也可. POSTSCRIPT:大学毕业快10年了,很少用英语,我按自己的想法搞的,还是英语高手(海龟)指点吧。
sharkwein
第2楼2007/12/17
无公害食品行动计划和农产品质量安全保障体系构建是我国加强农产品质量安全管理、提高农产品品质的两项重要政策。
The pollution-free food plan and the system of agro-products safety are two important policies, which are utilized to strenghten the quality and safety management of agro-products.
无公害农产品是我国农业阶段性发展的必然产物,是我国农产品走向市场化、国际化的必然选择,其产生具有深刻的历史背景和社会基础。
The pollution-free agro-products are necessary end of agriculture development, necessary choice of international market of agro-product trade in China. It has a deep historic background and social basis.
请版主指教
happyjyl
第3楼2007/12/17
无公害农产品是我国农业阶段性发展的必然产物,是我国农产品走向市场化、国际化的必然选择,其产生具有深刻的历史背景和社会基础。
Pollution-free agricultural products are the necessary result of the development of Chinese agriculture and the only choice for Chinese agricultural products to be marketed domestically and abroad. It has great social-historical background.
个人觉得最后的“其产生具有深刻的历史背景和社会基础”很没必要。这是典型的空话,我不觉得无公害农产品有什么深刻的历史背景,而且“深刻”这个词跟“社会基础”也不搭配啊。
happyjyl
第4楼2007/12/17
system和policy怎么是一回事呢?个人觉得中文原文就说得挺别扭的,不如翻译时直接写成这样:
The pollution-free food plan and the system of agro-products safety are utilized to strenghten the quality and safety management of agro-products and are attached with great importance.
sharkwein
第5楼2007/12/17
system作为体系、policy作为政策措施是不是不太符合英语规范?
“构建XXX体系是XXX的重要政策之一”是目前政府公文常用的表达方式,应该没有什么问题。在英语中我实在不是很清楚应该怎么表达,所以来请教各位
gonghaofan
第8楼2007/12/17
无公害农产品是我国农业阶段性发展的必然产物,是我国农产品走向市场化、国际化的必然选择,其产生具有深刻的历史背景和社会基础。
Pollution-free agro-product is the inevitable product of phased development of China's agriculture , is the inevitab choice of China's agricultural product to move towards the marketization and the internationalization, which production has the profound historical background and the social basis.
gonghaofan
第9楼2007/12/17
以自然辩证的观点探讨了农产品质量安全管理的进展,以科学发展观分析了我国农产品质量安全管理的措施以及过渡方式,探讨了农产品质量安全管理的方向。
Has discussed the progress of agro-product safety management by the viewpoint of nature dialectics , has analyzed the measure of China's agro-product safety management as well as the transition way by scientific development view, and has discussed the direction of agro-product safety management.