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【求助】英文摘要需要修改一下

水番

2009/10/29

大家好,我写的论文,审稿老师让我把英文摘要需要修改一下,我做了一下修改,我怕写的不好,请大家再帮我修改一下,谢谢了!

"摘要：建立了应用配有NPD检测器的气相色谱仪检测蔬菜中涕灭威、异丙威、嘧霉胺、莠去津、三唑醇、噻嗪酮、抑霉唑残留量的方法。样品采用乙酸乙酯提取，硅胶柱净化，旋蒸定容后上机检测。以GC-NPD测定，外标法定量。7种农药添加浓度在0.002～0.03mg/kg时，回收率在82.3%～100.1%之间，相对标准偏差在1.7%～5.1%之间。检测限分别为：三唑醇0.006mg/kg，其它6种为0.002mg/kg。"

"Abstract：The method of determining aldicarb，isoprocarb，pyrimethanil，atrazine,triadimenol，buprofezin，Imazalil in vegetable was established．The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and in the purifying process Silica was used . detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , recoveries (n=6) were 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.The limits of determination were respectively: triadimenol are 0.006mg/kg, any other 6 pesticides are 0.002mg/kg ."

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poorlittle

第1楼2009/10/29

Suggestion ;

The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and purified with silica.

detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. – Where is the verb?

In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , the recovery (n=6) is 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.

The limit of determination is 0.006mg/kg for triadimenol and 0.002mg/kg for the rest of the 6 pesticides

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何当奇

第2楼2009/10/30

poorlittle(poorlittle) 发表:Suggestion ;

The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and purified with silica.

detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. – Where is the verb?
detected。这句少主语。本身是想用前句的主语，但是他用了句号。如果改为逗号，then detected by。。。就差不多了。

In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , the recovery (n=6) is 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.

The limit of determination is 0.006mg/kg for triadimenol and 0.002mg/kg for the rest of the 6 pesticides

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何当奇

第3楼2009/10/30

Abstract：One method of detection of aldicarb，isoprocarb，pyrimethanil，atrazine,triadimenol，buprofezin，imazalil in vegetables was established．The samples were extracted with ethyl acetate and purified by Silica,then detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and quantified by external standard method.
水番(psq0513) 发表:大家好,我写的论文,审稿老师让我把英文摘要需要修改一下,我做了一下修改,我怕写的不好,请大家再帮我修改一下,谢谢了!

"摘要：建立了应用配有NPD检测器的气相色谱仪检测蔬菜中涕灭威、异丙威、嘧霉胺、莠去津、三唑醇、噻嗪酮、抑霉唑残留量的方法。样品采用乙酸乙酯提取，硅胶柱净化，旋蒸定容后上机检测。以GC-NPD测定，外标法定量。7种农药添加浓度在0.002～0.03mg/kg时，回收率在82.3%～100.1%之间，相对标准偏差在1.7%～5.1%之间。检测限分别为：三唑醇0.006mg/kg，其它6种为0.002mg/kg。"

"Abstract：The method of determining aldicarb，isoprocarb，pyrimethanil，atrazine,triadimenol，buprofezin，Imazalil in vegetable was established．The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and in the purifying process Silica was used . detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , recoveries (n=6) were 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.The limits of determination were respectively: triadimenol are 0.006mg/kg, any other 6 pesticides are 0.002mg/kg ."

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水番

第7楼2009/10/30

太感谢以上两位的帮助了!

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poorlittle

第8楼2009/10/30

There is still one typing error (not spelling) in your original.

I believe that you are capable to find it out.
水番(psq0513) 发表:"Abstract：The method of determining aldicarb，isoprocarb，pyrimethanil，atrazine,triadimenol，buprofezin，Imazalil in vegetable was established．The sample was extracted with ethyl acetate and in the purifying process Silica was used . detected by GC-NPD, qualitative two-pillar and amount of external standard. In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , recoveries (n=6) were 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.The limits of determination were respectively: triadimenol are 0.006mg/kg, any other 6 pesticides are 0.002mg/kg ."

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何当奇

第9楼2009/10/30

In the range of 0.002～0.03mg/kg , recoveries (n=6) were 82.3～100.1% ，with RSD of 1.7～5.1%.
这句话还是不对
我上次发帖很困难。
楼主自己再考虑下

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